11 Plus Figurative Language: Similes, Metaphors & More

Similes and Metaphors

A simile compares two things using like or as: The lake was as smooth as glass. Her voice was like honey. Children need to identify similes in passages and explain what the comparison means, in these examples, the lake was very calm and the voice was sweet and pleasant.

A metaphor states that one thing is another: The classroom was a zoo. Time is money. Metaphors are stronger than similes because they assert identity rather than similarity. Children should recognise that the classroom was not literally a zoo, it was chaotic and noisy.

Exam questions typically present a passage containing figurative language and ask: What does the author mean by this phrase? Children must move beyond the literal meaning to explain the intended effect. Practise this by reading passages together and discussing what figurative phrases really communicate.

Personification and Onomatopoeia

Personification gives human qualities to non-human things: The wind whispered through the trees. The sun smiled down on them. Children must recognise that the wind cannot literally whisper, the author is describing the sound it makes using a human action.

Onomatopoeia uses words that sound like what they describe: crash, buzz, sizzle, murmur, pop. These words appear frequently in descriptive passages and create vivid sensory impressions.

Both techniques are useful in creative writing. A child who writes the thunder growled overhead uses personification to create atmosphere. One who writes the bacon sizzled and popped uses onomatopoeia to engage the reader's senses. Encourage your child to collect examples from their reading.

Alliteration, Hyperbole, and Idioms

Alliteration repeats the same consonant sound at the start of nearby words: the slippery snake slithered silently. It creates rhythm and emphasis. Children should identify it in passages and understand its effect.

Hyperbole is deliberate exaggeration for effect: I have told you a million times. It is not meant literally. Exam questions may ask whether a statement is fact or opinion, and hyperbolic statements are always opinions or exaggerations.

Idioms are phrases whose meaning cannot be understood from the individual words: it is raining cats and dogs, break a leg, piece of cake. Children with limited exposure to English idioms may interpret them literally. Wide reading is the best preparation for recognising idioms.

Using Figurative Language in Creative Writing

Examiners reward creative writing that uses figurative language naturally and effectively. A well-chosen simile or metaphor can elevate a piece from competent to impressive.

The key word is naturally. A passage stuffed with forced metaphors reads worse than one with none. Teach your child to include one or two strong figurative phrases per piece, one in the opening to set the scene, and one in a moment of emotion or action.

Practise by giving your child a plain sentence and asking them to rewrite it with figurative language. The man was angry becomes The man's eyes were furnaces. The garden was pretty becomes The garden was a painter's palette of colour. This exercise builds the habit of reaching for vivid language.

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